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Subj: Re: Found a sort-of solution
Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 at 03:00:38 pm EST (Viewed 3 times)
Reply Subj: Re: Found a sort-of solution
Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 at 10:22:33 am EST (Viewed 304 times)



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      Besides, as I'm sure Yuki would point out of she discussed it with Lara, Lara hasn't even committed to the Parodyverse, let alone to one person, so how can she judge Jay?



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    Lara doesn't mean it to be cruel, it's just a deep-seated fear of hers. Back home her ex dumped her *and* kicked her out because she wasn't ready to wed yet - so she has issues of her own with commitment. But basically, right now she's afraid of getting her heard broken if she thinks she sees it coming.


We need to see this in a story.


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        She still likes him, though, and likes being friends with him, but will probably steer clear of anything too intimate.

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        Noted.



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    She does believe that friendship generally lasts longer than an intimate relationship right now.


We need to see this in a story.

Really, Jason. You've got loads of good stuff backstoried away there but we need to read it in a compelling narrative so we feel it like you do. Proceed.







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