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Subj: Re: Well, I'm trying to get a little action back on the board.
Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 at 06:59:48 pm EST (Viewed 17 times)
Reply Subj: Re: Well, I'm trying to get a little action back on the board.
Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 at 03:37:17 pm EST (Viewed 1331 times)


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    There's a lot of stuff to get through in this chapter so I'll need every trick I can muster to make it vaguely interesting.



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    I've used that technique many times before. And also I've used someone narrating something that already happened.


I sometimes avoid it because it can rob events of their immediacy. The structure of this chapter is a compromise, alternating between the third and first persons in consecutive sections.


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      Indeed. I suspect she [Chiaki] felt a responsibility to the three women with her in thier current predicament too.



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    Not just them, she also worries about anyone who formed any kind of bond with her. Hatman, Akiko, Anna, etc.


You'll notice she was also our window into understanding the motives and enthusiasms of the enemy.


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    Also, on another aside: Because I'm falling behind on Zephiir's Prophecy I'm going to confuse people even more and start posting a 2nd story with Anna and Chiaki called Catch and Release. It has a surprise ending.


I noticed it there. Reading it will be my reward when I bash another 3000 words out.






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