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killer shrike

Subj: Re: Another enjoyable chapter (Part Five comments)
Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 at 05:33:28 pm EST (Viewed 4 times)
Reply Subj: Another enjoyable chapter (Part Five comments)
Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 at 04:44:45 pm EST (Viewed 4 times)



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    The Rabid Wolf's pov was a good read. The poor gal really has had a rough go of it, and I'm sure her life isn't going to get much easier now that she's kin to the Hooded Hood.


I expect things to get worse.


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    The Lost Legion taking on Skinner and Flay was tremendous as well. You came up with a creative way for the heroes to once again beat the nigh omnipotent foe, no mean feat, given the fact a lot of them aren't used to working together. But then when you have Yo and Hatman doing strategy, that can help a roster out.


My problem isn't just coming up with different ways to beat unbeatable baddies, it's finding different rhythms and styles of battle so the combat doesn't feel like a retread of the last one. For example this issue features three big fights against villains with similar abilities. The challenge is to make each one seem distinct from the others and the last one bigger and tougher than the ones before.

Why do I write myself into these corners?



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    Speaking of Hatty, I'm curious to see if there's any fall out of him losing control and killing the Carnifex's minions. Jay's pretty old school when it comes to the superheroics, so I can see this affecting him.


I expect it will. I'm setting up as much future plot as I can in this chapter.


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    Looking forward to the next bit.


Now might be the time to consider your tie-in.






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