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Subj: Re: Widening Reply...
Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 at 07:42:02 am EDT (Viewed 2 times)
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 at 10:45:51 pm EDT (Viewed 331 times)



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        I'd assume she's taking precautions to avoid being killed or stripped of her abilities for the sake of discovery. She believes some things are bigger than herself or her quest.

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        Those are sensible precautions but they're also the equivalent of going swimming with armbands on.



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    It's more like an undercover cop. There are certain things you just *have* to blow your cover for, like if you see someone being murdered.


It's the difference between being a tourist and a local.


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    There are certain aspects of Faite's job that, if she ignores them when they're needed, would cause untold disaster for everyone, not just herself. That, she'd be willing to step away from her journey for.


You'll need to write that carefully to avoid the impression that she's just slumming or doing a little poverty tourism.






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