Quote: Definitely agree here. This is a great opportunity to contrast the strengths and weaknesses of both characters. Add in Asil feeling conflicted if there is friction between the two and I think there is some excellent story potential here.
Quote: Then again, we already did a version of that when Mumphrey was in charge. Lisa and Dancer were held captive and Mumphrey made the call that duty came before comrades, a decision which didn't sit well with Vizh. Not that I'd be against it from the other side as well.
I think I'd prefer to find new ways for them to interact.
I half-remember either a story or conversation about a story from way back when CSFB! did his big BZL/DC crossover. There was some confrontation between Dancer and Iron Man (who is Marvel, yes) and a debate about probabilities vs technology etc. and who would win in a big 'ol vs battle. And all I could think was "Those two wouldn't fight. They'd be in bed within 10 minutes."
I don't think Vizh and Mumph will end up in bed together but I hope whatever they do do it won't be a repeat of what we've seen before.
Quote: The LL needs someone in charge who is: a) Apparently harmless, and b) actually gives a damn about the considerations of others.
CSFB! is smarter than he looks.
Quote: Visionary said before that he suspects people wanted him in charge last time because he doesn't really need to do anything but be available to take the blame when things go wrong. That's essentially the chairman's job in this set up too, from what I see. Mumphrey's job seems to be his secretary of state... someone to be deployed to deal with the troublemakers that need a stern talking to. By not being the leader himself, he can take an aggressive stand while not actually escalating the situation, since he's not the one with his finger on the button, so to speak.
It's an analogy.
Quote: However, I'm always very cautious with my "primary" characters about giving them too much spotlight at the cost of others. That was why I shifted Mumph out of the LL before and at one point was intending to kill him off at the end of the Parody War. I think I need to reflect further on how wise it is to have him back there in the cast.
Quote: I like how i've written stories about Vizh having 9 gorgeous aliens chasing after him, bedding Dancer, and a host of other questionable tales without pimping out my characters. Makes me wonder how far I'd have to go to get people to notice...
Let's find out. Write more.
Quote: In any event, even though I never asked for the job back, Vizh is apparently the LL leader again. So that means that Mumphrey serves at his pleasure, or something. So no resigning or dropping dead. I enjoy him being there too. I don't think he undermines anything as long as he believes that Vizh is the right one to be making the calls right now. Lisa, and Visionary each went from leading to just being associate Legionnaires without undermining the current chairs... no reason that wouldn't work for Mumph.
I'll take it all under advisement.
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#344: Untold Tales of the Lair Legion: Candidates Parts One to Four: Romance and Profanity · The Hooded Hood reveals the newest line-up of the Lair Legion... slowly · Fri May 07, 2010 at 03:35:04 pm EDT
Alcheman is so wonderfully forthright. We've been missing a straight man. :) [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Sat May 22, 2010 at 12:02:49 am EDT
And then there were four · Al B. Harper · Mon May 17, 2010 at 01:28:54 am EDT
At least. · HH · Sat May 22, 2010 at 07:42:43 am EDT
That invitation came in just the nick of time · killer shrike isn't sure what to make of Wild Angelica's invite.... · Sat May 15, 2010 at 05:53:05 pm EDT
Romance and Profanity...good thing it wasn't the other way around. · Anime Jason · Sat May 15, 2010 at 04:06:53 pm EDT
Nice work... · L! · Sat May 15, 2010 at 12:26:42 pm EDT
I enjoyed this. (no text) · Rhiannon · Sat May 15, 2010 at 11:35:36 am EDT
I wish chick flicks had this kind of romance in it...with explosions · Hatman · Sat May 15, 2010 at 09:59:15 am EDT
A bit light on the romance side of things... · Visionary · Sat May 15, 2010 at 08:54:58 am EDT
This is good. (no text) · Rhiannon · Thu May 13, 2010 at 11:10:51 am EDT
Nothing like head trauma to break an awkward point in the conversation · Hatman · Wed May 12, 2010 at 03:56:15 pm EDT
Part 3 Comments · Anime Jason · Wed May 12, 2010 at 03:31:21 pm EDT
Good to see [spoiler leader] settling in and [spoiler assistant] being brought on board the support staff ... [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Wed May 12, 2010 at 12:53:02 am EDT
See? I barely have the job back, and everything comes crashing down. (no text) · Visionary admires the suddenness of the apocalypse, but notes that "The Sopranos" beat you to this ending. · Tue May 11, 2010 at 11:01:49 pm EDT
I think part of Part 3 got chopped off. (no text) · killer shrike liked what he read of it though · Tue May 11, 2010 at 07:58:48 pm EDT
Nice · Al B. Harper · Tue May 11, 2010 at 07:42:15 pm EDT
Really? · HH · Tue May 11, 2010 at 11:27:58 pm EDT
Effectively ominous setup for [spoiler villain] and credible recruitment of [spoiler heroes] onto the team. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Tue May 11, 2010 at 06:02:56 pm EDT
This is amazing. Sorry I didn't read it sooner. (no text) · Rhiannon · Tue May 11, 2010 at 10:57:58 am EDT
I've got some mice in my garage Donar can smite if he's still in the mood · Hatman · Mon May 10, 2010 at 01:15:28 pm EDT
Hmmm.... · L! · Sun May 09, 2010 at 04:05:12 pm EDT
Widening Reply... · Anime Jason · Sun May 09, 2010 at 01:06:37 pm EDT
I like how the last few lines encourage a re-read with a new mental image. · Visionary · Sun May 09, 2010 at 12:31:36 pm EDT
Good stuff (no text) · killer shrike · Sun May 09, 2010 at 09:12:45 am EDT
Sweet! Glad to see SPOILER again. But we're still no clearer on the new lineup.... (no text) · Al B. Harper has always been a fan · Sat May 08, 2010 at 11:32:35 pm EDT
Nice. Very Nice. · L! · Fri May 07, 2010 at 09:19:31 pm EDT
That was better than CSFB!'s first speech at least. · Anime Jason · Fri May 07, 2010 at 07:54:27 pm EDT
Well-executed, and an interesting way of making [spoiler government character] look like a good guy for a change. (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Fri May 07, 2010 at 07:42:07 pm EDT
I didn't expect (spoiler) to be on the roster · killer shrike · Fri May 07, 2010 at 05:35:37 pm EDT
I think I handled that well. · Visionary · Fri May 07, 2010 at 05:16:01 pm EDT
Brilliant like always. · Rhiannon · Fri May 07, 2010 at 05:02:54 pm EDT
One down... · Hatman · Fri May 07, 2010 at 04:36:46 pm EDT
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