There were last time, too, but I wasn't getting many readers. So I didn't think it was the number, just that I picked a subject with very low interest.





That's possible too. She might have changed something a long time ago that she since forgot about because she lost her own personal awareness of the changes she made along with the ability to see and feel everything at once. She relies on only her memory now, which being human, is somewhat faulty.

The danger in that, of course, is she could have changed something, and meant to change it back, but forgot, and this is all a consequence of faulty memory.





Not to mention all of the entities that are long gone, but could have set something up ahead of time. Like the former Destroyer of Tales, the Moderator, or back when the younger Hooded Hood was still getting accustomed to his powers.





Sometimes the spell checker or auto-complete does that, too.





I've actually tried changing the perspective already, but not the ordering. It really wasn't very good, though, because I axed most of it on the *first* re-reading.


Adding comments about the new part:

I can't help but think Yuki wouldn't have helped a bunch of vampires at all if it wasn't for the fact that the Lair Legion can use as many allies or people who owe them favors as possible. Unlike Hatman, she can see the positive aspects of staying in a neutral grey area. It's a completely new era.