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Subj: I gather the entre was quite delicious.
Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 at 06:50:06 pm EST (Viewed 8 times)
Reply Subj: We never seem to have a nice evening out anymore.
Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 at 04:42:21 pm EST (Viewed 411 times)



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    Well, you've certainly pulled in the epic cast for the big throwdown between predator and prey. You're quite good at making me hate these nigh-omnipotent conquerors, and the opening with the Carnifex toasting the team was no exception. Quite the sick and depraved puppy he is, and it'll be difficult for him to suitably pay for his crimes. I'll keep my fingers crossed that we beat him and survive, at least. The surviving part is key.


Gloating is a very important part of superhero comics. People underestimate gloating as a dramatic neccessity.


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    I liked the check-ins on the different teams and groupings. I'm looking forward to seeing how Vespiir's story plays out... there's a great deal of urgency to her part in things. Hopefully her ordeals won't be for nothing, and she'll get the message through. Of course, the message seems to be leaking out in other areas as well, with Flapjack able to warn Mumph and the Librarian's inner circle knowing the truth too. (Loved the Moo cameo, btw, even if she remained in the dark.)


Vespiir's story is only just beginning. As for the Carnifex, the tighter he squeezes the more of the Parodyverse leaks through his fist.

We really need Daio to do a tie in right now regarding the lab accident. Could you pass the word?



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    There were moments of fun to be had as well, especially with the EEE crowd. So Cody is a cat fancier, eh? I can't say that I blame him; Tigra always filled out a bikini well. Of course, I'm also allergic to cats, which is probably for the best considering the amount of "Three's Company" style misunderstanding that drag Vizh under. Glad to see it shifting to a new generation.


I'm not sure how much misunderstanding there was, really. It's more like a single entendre.


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    I also enjoyed the lighthouse scenes, and the interaction between the kids. Bringing back the Nanny makes perfect sense in this situation, as I wondered how you were going to deal with a threat that grave focusing on the children themselves. Looking forward to the throwdown over at the Hastings place as well...


The technical problem I had was that I needed to show how nasty the Carnifex was by having his minions go after the wider cast without having the whole wider cast slaughtered or making the minions seem incompetent. I hope I've struck a balance.


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    All in all, quite the dinner party so far... I can't wait to see how things go from here!


I've set myself a tricky one to resolve. I should really start thinking of a way to finish this.






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