Tales of the Parodyverse >> View Post
·
Post By
Visionary 
Moderator

Member Since: Sat Jan 03, 2004
Posts: 2,131
In Reply To
HH

Subj: But you can use as many blue pills you want without fear of the side effects.
Posted: Fri Dec 23, 2016 at 11:51:52 pm EST (Viewed 859 times)
Reply Subj: There can be performance pressure though.
Posted: Fri Dec 23, 2016 at 12:41:04 am EST (Viewed 3 times)


Aha... a mini mystery to solve, and a chilling villain to defeat in the depths of madness-spawning Antarctica! I enjoyed Sally this chapter as she worked through her reroute game issues that denied her the much deserved beach retreat she was expecting. Interesting to see how quickly the various subsets of refugees turn on each other here... I suppose that integrating such cultures would be a challenge even in the best of times.

I'm curious to see what damage Haggie's little portal brings about, and of course how Ebony might yet be saved! I don't think that Sally would like to serve as her replacement after all, even in the very short term they may have left.


    Quote:
    I found that Sion and Helen worked very well together as protagonists. They'll be back in a future section, obviously


Well. I find them an appealing couple, certainly.


    Quote:
    On production news, I'm ready to post today's chapter except for the footnote/link bits, which you mentioned that you might advise upon.


I apologize... I spent some late night hours looking through what I could find, but I seem to be rather limited while on vacation. Still, I hate to have held up the flow of the story.




Posted with Apple iPad 602.3.12
On Topic™ © 2003-2024 Powermad Software
Copyright © 2003-2024 by Powermad Software