Previous Post Now I haven't read the story but there is a problem in your recap: > Ben Hermes, Semi-Transparent Lad, was drafted as a Moderator minion in this new reality. Ok. That's right. Hermes was remade as an Agent of S.P.A.M. > After a run-in with Kat Gillespie where he decided to let her go he now seeks only to escape the Iowa compound if he can find a vehicle to get away in. But, Ben never had a "run-in with Kat". Kat clashed with another remade Hero of mine: Fred Harris a.k.a. Ham-Boy. More comments regarding this story will follow after I finish reading it.

As always: an interesting read. A bit confusing in parts, but then battles can be confusing with all that is going on.

In reading the story, I think I have figured out a way I can explain the whole HB/STL mix up, no need to change anything on your part. The use of C-Class as S.P.A.M. agents was inspired, I hadn't even thought of that.

Not really sure how I'll resolve Kat in all this. Her being at the final fight of The Moderator seems odd to me. I still need to figure out a way to explain Mr. Spooky's appearance & cryptic message to the young Miss Gillespie. Then there a few other things to work with or around. But, then that not for you to figure out: it's mine.

I look forword to seeing what you prestn with us next. Maybe something about the Hood's Daughter?