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L!

Location: Seattle, Washington
Member Since: Sun Jan 04, 2004
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HH

Subj: Re: Thanks!
Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2016 at 03:34:59 pm EST (Viewed 438 times)
Reply Subj: Re: Thanks!
Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2016 at 12:23:45 pm EST (Viewed 3 times)



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      This story was stalled for the most part until you made the suggestion to "change the POV character" so we got another appearance of the Church of the Glorious Duo which last showed up in an earlier interlude to this story. I guess they only show up during "interludes" \:\)



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    It's a technique that lots of authors use but I've never seen it written up in any of "advice for writers" column for some reason.


sure. It sometimes does help to attack the story from a different direction.


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        Some more storytelling and worldbuilding here, reintroducing and updating situations and cast and furthering the mystery.

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        This is part of the story was more of an interlude of sorts: It gets everyone to the point where they were originally going to be before the break in the story, now 3 years ago. This fact will be important.



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    I certainly appreciated the reminders.


I needed some reminders myself. "where did I leave off again?"


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      Yes, I did side step doing anything with Lee Bookman. No I don't know if Lee remained in The Void wearing Chad's clothes. Yes, there is a reason why He didn't exit The Void with the rest of them.



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    Lee has always deserved spotlight stories of his own.


If i knew what to do with him, I'd do more with him.


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        Bring on the pay-off!

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        Which will either happen soon or will happen in another 3 years from now! \:\)



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    Now would likely garner you more guaranteed feedback. The board is remarkably active again for a little while, but my own contributions as a writer will be strictly time-limited, probably to the current Untold Tales trilogy. I have other paid writing work stacking up, starting with another Sherlock Holmes short story and signing off on the print edition of my novel Labours of Hercules (due, um. last November). I'll still respond to other people's postings, of course, as I have done for the last decade. My point is, things might quieten down a bit after a while, so you may want to get your work in front of an aufience while that audience is definitely assembled.


It's more do with do I have the drive/ideas to get stuff out for people to read. Plus, I've been known to be distracted by other stuff so writing might take a backseat.

If I really do any long form writing, it's most likely over on my Blog: http://stuffbybrian.blogspot.com which ends up being me rambling on about comics.




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