> “Not quite,†replied her grandfather. “Tara Brooks is the mother of the Madonna. It is her daughter who will be my bride. And then your existence will be assured.â€Â
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> “That’s wonderful, honey,†the buyer grinned at her. “I’m Martin. Martin Bonnington.â€Â
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Now, does this mean that FA has a sister, or that things are going to get really weird.
On the other hand, I liked the song references, and was pleased that I only remembered one of them.
As is always the case with my writing, please feel free to comment.
I welcome both positive and negative criticism of my work, although I cannot promise to enjoy the negative.
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 Saving the Future – Part 16: One Moment In Time - version 2 · The Hooded Hood addresses one of his longest-running subplots · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 09:15:12 am EDT
- The write was good and the rewrite was even better. (no text) · champagne · Mon Jun 16, 2008 at 06:35:59 pm EDT
- Very intriguing rewrites... · Nats · Fri Jun 13, 2008 at 11:55:17 pm EDT
- Some clever and intriguing adjustments... · Visionary · Fri Jun 13, 2008 at 10:36:33 pm EDT
- Comments version 2 · Anime Jason
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- And this just makes even more complications. · Rhiannon · Fri Jun 13, 2008 at 12:19:13 pm EDT
- Nicely edited (no text) · killer shrike · Fri Jun 13, 2008 at 09:43:55 am EDT
- On this. · HH · Tue Jun 10, 2008 at 07:02:46 am EDT
- My thoughts · Scott · Tue Jun 10, 2008 at 08:56:22 pm EDT
- Re: My thoughts · Manga Shoggoth · Thu Jun 12, 2008 at 04:27:19 am EDT
- Now, I'm quite fond of you. If you'd like to exchange your soul for certain success, let me know. (no text) · The Dainty Satan · Thu Jun 12, 2008 at 01:36:36 am EDT
- Hey, I like you plenty. Of course, if you wanted to bribe me with some baked goods, I suppose I could like you more... · Visionary · Thu Jun 12, 2008 at 12:08:22 am EDT
- Nobody hates you man · Hatman · Wed Jun 11, 2008 at 11:17:20 pm EDT
- Has it really been that long? · L! · Wed Jun 11, 2008 at 09:25:30 pm EDT
- Why would we hate you for doing what you should be doing? · Nats · Wed Jun 11, 2008 at 04:43:32 pm EDT
- I don't dislike you, and I don't think anyone else here does, either. Things happen. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Wed Jun 11, 2008 at 01:48:09 pm EDT
- One question: · killer shrike · Wed Jun 11, 2008 at 07:17:38 am EDT
- Re: My thoughts · Anime Jason · Wed Jun 11, 2008 at 12:33:39 am EDT
- Right then. Carry on. Sorry to be an oik or bounder or whatever. Just didn't want your well-written story to go to waste. (no text) · Nats · Tue Jun 10, 2008 at 12:07:54 pm EDT
- I remember... · Anime Jason · Tue Jun 10, 2008 at 09:51:12 am EDT
- I want the story back! (and the next one) · Anime Jason bring common sense...hopefully · Tue Jun 10, 2008 at 01:33:50 am EDT
- If I say "Roni Y. Avis", does that mean people will stop asking me to finish "Happiness"? (no text) · Visionary's just happy he doesn't have to bribe other people to use his characters. · Tue Jun 10, 2008 at 12:36:56 am EDT
- Response to the resent events. · L! · Mon Jun 09, 2008 at 10:50:55 pm EDT
- I'll second Nats' nomination of "Nick O'Time." This story is too good to remove. (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Mon Jun 09, 2008 at 06:43:43 pm EDT
- Bah. · Nats · Mon Jun 09, 2008 at 05:07:27 pm EDT
- This is ridiculous (no text) · killer shrike realizes he is the worst person to say this, given his past antics, but still..... · Mon Jun 09, 2008 at 05:01:42 pm EDT
- Reserved Characters · Manga Shoggoth · Mon Jun 09, 2008 at 04:03:16 pm EDT
- Aw dang. · Scott · Sun Jun 08, 2008 at 01:21:42 am EDT
- So, this is all just an elaborate scheme to get [spoiler] laid? (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! nonetheless enjoyed seeing both his characters and songs he recognized from his favorite decade · Sat Jun 07, 2008 at 12:31:08 am EDT
- Thank God for this. Now that poor subplot can stop the running. Or at least slow down to a jog, or perhaps a power walk. (no text) · Nats · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 11:08:59 pm EDT
- . (no text) · . · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 07:21:20 pm EDT
- Hmmm... and yet she doesn't seem the motherly type. · Visionary · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 07:08:15 pm EDT
- Interesting. Most Interesting. · L! · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 02:11:25 pm EDT
- Still? · HH · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 02:19:20 pm EDT
- I think the title is a song too. [Spoilers] · Anime Jason · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 12:25:42 pm EDT
- Interesting (no text) · Rhiannon · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 11:21:31 am EDT
- Quite a surprising diversion (no text) · killer shrike · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 11:06:09 am EDT
- Oh... Crap. · Manga Shoggoth · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 10:26:08 am EDT
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