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HH
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Rhiannon

Subj: I promised you I'd finish it.
Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 at 08:20:25 pm EDT
Reply Subj: A brilliant conclusion.
Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 at 05:57:26 pm EDT


> Though I'm not quite sure what that last line meant.

Excellent.

> The moving from place to place was a brilliant twist and the destinations truely varied.

I needed a way to make this battle have a different feel from all the other LL-vs-hugely-powerful-single-baddies fights, and especially from their brawl with the PM in #300. I thought the shifting venues and the involvement of bystanders might give this a twist.

> The discovery of the Storyhearts true hiding place was clever, I guessed it was the snowglobe, I was right. I thought for a while that one of the children might use the Storyheart as all stories belong to children in a way, but Visionary doing so was great too.

I established the snowglobe in an earlier chapter too, to play fair.

> The ending scene was surprising, I'm wondering if some of the happy endinged Legionaires might have a few stops on the way to their happy endings, Goldeneyed showing up in the nightmare that Laurie ended up in for a while might be fitting but I'll wait to see how you end that youself.

Really I did that with those characters because I feel given the long absence of posters or feedback that my license to write them had expired. Of the vanished heroes the ones I think I'm most likely to write again are G-Eyed and DK. I understand AG has an epilogue story in mind for Trickshot too.

> Dancers trick with Danny was clever, and so was Trickshots ending, the others probaly had clever twists in their endings as well but you're yet to mention them.

AG decided that Tricky was heading back to the wild west. I thought the carny was a natural setting for him.

Now we all need to pressure Scott to come up with an amazing new character to join the Legion.

> I await the aftermath chapter, don't rush it, you've got to keep this standard.

I won't rush.




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