> > “Wait a minute,†called out Ben Ulsen of the Paradopolis Daily Trombone, “each of these seems to be patterned on one of the real Lair Legion.â€Â
> With the notable exception of the Shoggoth. No voulenteers?
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No DNA.
> > “You failed in your promise,†Orankle told him. “You broke your precious word.â€Â
> I can't help feeling that this will come back to bite him somehow.
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Let's hope so. I wanted to show off different aspects of the Carnifex in this story, and his yearning for honour and his apparently flippant response to being thwarted are part of it.
> > A few more contributions would be welcome. While I welcome folks trusting me to push the story along I feel to be doing a lot of the heavy lifting here.
> Sorry. I actually started working on the other story, and then ended up with a wonderful little cold that has crapped up my thought processes completely, so I haven't done mutch on that either...
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Sally's got a similar cold. It's not helping her temper.
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- Saving the Future – Part 12: The New Lair Legions (and Other Heroes) - revised and corrected · The Hooded Hood introduces the new contenders and then thins the field · Wed May 14, 2008 at 02:35:03 pm EDT
- I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this run of stories. Thank you Ian & everyone! (no text) · champagne · Mon May 19, 2008 at 07:42:51 pm EDT
- Okay, this was pretty much nail-biting stuff. You owe me some nail polish. (no text) · Dancer was also on the edge of her seat · Sun May 18, 2008 at 07:13:24 am EDT
- Nice. Very Nice. · L! · Thu May 15, 2008 at 07:26:40 pm EDT
- Now that those tweaks have been made, a fine quality story. [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Thu May 15, 2008 at 03:03:38 pm EDT
- Cum mortuis in lingua mortua · Manga Shoggoth · Thu May 15, 2008 at 06:25:51 am EDT
- Sorry I'm late...bad colds can be a pain. · Anime Jason · Wed May 14, 2008 at 11:42:34 pm EDT
- Alright, I've read the new version, thus I can now comment! · Hatman · Wed May 14, 2008 at 11:21:29 pm EDT
- Comments after I read this again; I was about to reply on the previous version (no text) · Hatman · Wed May 14, 2008 at 11:03:16 pm EDT
- Intriguing in both versions! · Visionary · Wed May 14, 2008 at 10:58:55 pm EDT
- You REALLY need to get a new e-mail. I sent my revisions to the piece you showed me TWICE already. [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! will offer an extended reply to the rest of the story later today, when time permits ... · Wed May 14, 2008 at 05:47:45 pm EDT
- Well, that was dark (no text) · killer shrike · Wed May 14, 2008 at 04:55:44 pm EDT
- Interesting. · Rhiannon · Wed May 14, 2008 at 04:20:04 pm EDT
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