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Manga Shoggoth

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The Hooded Hood introduces the new contenders and then thins the field

Subj: Cum mortuis in lingua mortua
Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 at 06:25:51 am EDT (Viewed 452 times)
Reply Subj: Saving the Future – Part 12: The New Lair Legions (and Other Heroes) - revised and corrected
Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 at 02:35:03 pm EDT (Viewed 1 times)


>     Ã¢â‚¬Å“Wait a minute,” called out Ben Ulsen of the Paradopolis Daily Trombone, “each of these seems to be patterned on one of the real Lair Legion.”

With the notable exception of the Shoggoth. No voulenteers?

>     Ã¢â‚¬Å“You failed in your promise,” Orankle told him. “You broke your precious word.”
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>     Ã¢â‚¬Å“I’m pretty sure I didn’t. No survivors. Every member of every sentient species in your whole Imperium, dead. I said I’d kill every last one and I did.”
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>     Ã¢â‚¬Å“Not every one,” Orankle told him. “Not unless you also kill me.”
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>     And she plunged her dagger into her breast and died; died of her own hand, not by the slayer of her Empire.
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>     Ã¢â‚¬Å“Well damn,” said the Carnifex.

I can't help feeling that this will come back to bite him somehow.

> A few more contributions would be welcome. While I welcome folks trusting me to push the story along I feel to be doing a lot of the heavy lifting here.

Sorry. I actually started working on the other story, and then ended up with a wonderful little cold that has crapped up my thought processes completely, so I haven't done mutch on that either...






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