> > As always: an interesting read. A bit confusing in parts, but then battles can be confusing with all that is going on.
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> The writing about them shouldn't be, though. It probably reflects how confused I got in multiple redrafts.
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I hardly do multiple drafts but then I don't long drawn out epics. But when I do multi-part stories some fact do jumbled up in the process.
> > In reading the story, I think I have figured out a way I can explain the whole HB/STL mix up, no need to change anything on your part. The use of C-Class as S.P.A.M. agents was inspired, I hadn't even thought of that.
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> What's worrying is I thought I got it from you.
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I did introduce a group of S.P.A.M. agents who are/were leaded by Mr. Gillespie (Catherine's father). The group included Ben Hermes & Fred Harris but I never named the rest of the group. So, C-Class could be the group. So, don't worry about it.
> > Not really sure how I'll resolve Kat in all this. Her being at the final fight of The Moderator seems odd to me. I still need to figure out a way to explain Mr. Spooky's appearance & cryptic message to the young Miss Gillespie. Then there a few other things to work with or around. But, then that not for you to figure out: it's mine.
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> I don't think she really was part of the final fight so much as caught up in it at the wrong moment. But I reasoned that once she was there she'd not just run away. In fact it was her idea that defeated the villain.
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ok. That makes since.
> > I look forword to seeing what you prestn with us next. Maybe something about the Hood's Daughter?
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> Not for a while yet, although it's possible I've already done it.
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cryptic!
