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L!
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Subj: Re: Comments post reading the story....Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 at 04:47:40 pm EDT
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> > > As always: an interesting read. A bit confusing in parts, but then battles can be confusing with all that is going on.
> > The writing about them shouldn't be, though. It probably reflects how confused I got in multiple redrafts.
> I hardly do multiple drafts but then I don't long drawn out epics. But when I do multi-part stories some fact do jumbled up in the process.
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In fact it bears all the telltale hallmarks of me straining - a gratuitous deus et machina Hooded Hood appearance, recourse to yet more nebulous and mysterious sinister types polanning for the future, heroic fatal but ultimately reversable sacrifices by many of the cast, lengthy exposition dialogue as plot points are ticked off, and an over-long multi-scene battle.
> > > In reading the story, I think I have figured out a way I can explain the whole HB/STL mix up, no need to change anything on your part. The use of C-Class as S.P.A.M. agents was inspired, I hadn't even thought of that.
> > What's worrying is I thought I got it from you.
> I did introduce a group of S.P.A.M. agents who are/were leaded by Mr. Gillespie (Catherine's father). The group included Ben Hermes & Fred Harris but I never named the rest of the group. So, C-Class could be the group. So, don't worry about it.
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It occurred that some of C-Team would be a lot less nice with a different training environment.
> > > I look forword to seeing what you prestn with us next. Maybe something about the Hood's Daughter?
> > Not for a while yet, although it's possible I've already done it.
> cryptic!
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 The Moderator Saga #48: Absolute Moderation · 10,000 words of conclusion from... the Hooded Hood. · Sat Mar 08, 2008 at 02:11:31 pm EST
- Well done Ian and all on penning a really great series. One for the record books :-) (no text) · Dancer is impressed with all of you · Fri Mar 14, 2008 at 04:51:37 am EDT
- Wonderful! Alas, no time to write comprehensive replies...Work crazy again. (no text) · Manga Shoggoth · Mon Mar 10, 2008 at 09:24:06 am EDT
- You always wait till I'm away before writing stuff, well almost always. (no text) · Rhiannon · Sun Mar 09, 2008 at 11:04:21 am EDT
- Excellent work! When do we start the next obscenely long round robin? · Visionary · Sat Mar 08, 2008 at 05:09:40 pm EST
- I only counted 9,999 words. · Anime Jason
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- Uh.. Mr. Waston, sir. I have found a possible small problem with the story... [Spoilers] · L! · Sat Mar 08, 2008 at 04:14:24 pm EST
- An impressive conclusion. Two questions: [Spoilers] · killer shrike · Sat Mar 08, 2008 at 03:59:22 pm EST
- We figured we didn't see you at the chat because you might have been working on this · Hatman · Sat Mar 08, 2008 at 03:35:54 pm EST
- A comprehensive conclusion. [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Sat Mar 08, 2008 at 03:21:24 pm EST
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