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Subj: Re: At the moment it's more of a wobble Posted: Tue Feb 09, 2016 at 08:44:56 pm EST (Viewed 506 times) | Reply Subj: At the moment it's more of a wobble Posted: Tue Feb 09, 2016 at 02:57:23 pm EST (Viewed 2 times) | ||||||
Quote: Fine story and well written. It doesn't really gel with how I see Ventredi or the plot I was heading into so I may go other ways if I ever return to his story, but that's just the plural nature of a shared universe.There is a bit of a surprise at the end of that plot. Quote: My minor nitpick of the day is that Hatty isn't technially a founding Legionnaire. Those are either Jarvis, NTU-150, Lisa, and spiffy (League of Regulars) or the above plus Fin Fang Foom, Dark Knight, Starseed, Banjooooo, Space Ghost, and Visionary (when the team renamed itself the Lair Legion). Hatty was one of the first people to join after that, so maybe he was "grandfathered in" like Cap was with the Avengers founders? That's how I win a no-prize, right?He's founding enough for this purpose. Quote: Extra points are awarded for some good solid character development for Chiaki and Lara.I told you that was coming. The focus of this story is really those two, and even more so Chiaki who will deal with some serious consequences. | |||||||
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