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I like this neighbor quite a bit for some reason and this little snippet does a fine job of setting up some romantic tension. So I gather he converted this garage property over to his crime-fighting needs and thus had to evict his neighbor's stuff? I quite like that angle, as it adds a very mundane complication to the superhero story.
That Haley does seem like a bright young spark, doesn't she? And I'm glad it was clear what was going on with the garage. I've grown lazy in my old age and am going to try and cut down on exposition and backstory.
