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'Over the Top' · -->Messenger presents a tale of the first World War This is a rough draft of a story I'm hoping to get published with much revision and editing. Comments and criticism is greatly welcomed. · Mon Feb 22, 2010 at 09:54:15 pm EST
- I'm gonna print this off to read it as well. Actual reply to come! (no text) · Goldeneyed · Sun Feb 28, 2010 at 01:21:22 pm EST
- I've actually printed this out to read in hard copy. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Fri Feb 26, 2010 at 01:05:04 pm EST
- This is very good. (no text) · Rhiannon · Fri Feb 26, 2010 at 12:41:51 pm EST
  - Thank you! :-) (no text) · Messenger · Sat Feb 27, 2010 at 05:37:46 am EST
- I'll read this during the weekend, I hope. (no text) · Anime Jason · Fri Feb 26, 2010 at 02:29:40 am EST
- Thoughts · Hatman · Thu Feb 25, 2010 at 02:42:43 pm EST
  - A helpful suggestion for Rolf. Thanks, Hatty. Sorry it wasn't your cup of tea, but thanks for reading all the same! (no text) · Messenger · Fri Feb 26, 2010 at 07:03:55 am EST
- World War I or II are always great settings for stories in my book. · Al B. Harper · Wed Feb 24, 2010 at 04:58:45 am EST
  - Thanks AL B. World War 1 and World War 2 (despite the latter's over-exposure in film and videogame) have always intrigued me for their storytelling potential. ... (no text) · Messenger · Wed Feb 24, 2010 at 09:41:05 pm EST
- Re: 'Over the Top' · HH · Tue Feb 23, 2010 at 07:48:12 pm EST
  - I'm bookmarking your reply. Ian, please read. · Messenger · Fri Feb 26, 2010 at 07:00:44 am EST
    - Re: I'm bookmarking your reply. Ian, please read. · HH · Fri Feb 26, 2010 at 07:38:35 pm EST
  - Thanks, Hood. I'm typing from the road, but I am very grateful for the feedback and I'll give you a reply in full tomorrow night. :-) (no text) · Messenger · Wed Feb 24, 2010 at 09:38:26 pm EST
    - Actually, extremely grateful. You obviously put a lot of thought and effort into this. (no text) · Messenger · Wed Feb 24, 2010 at 09:57:36 pm EST
  - This is really interesting (and valuable) feedback. Makes me want to write something polished now. (no text) · Visionary is lucky if he doesn't leave out major words in his sentences these days. · Tue Feb 23, 2010 at 09:51:12 pm EST
    - Do it! I'd love to see a serious story from you accompanied by the same kinda gritty artwork you did for that Messenger portrait eons ago. (no text) · Messenger · Wed Feb 24, 2010 at 09:42:53 pm EST
    - Poor Rhiannon gets notes like this on all her work. (no text) · HH · Wed Feb 24, 2010 at 03:58:45 am EST
      - Poor? I think she's lucky. I'd love to have this kind of feedback to stuff I write. Not that I write stuff....but if I did write stuff...then I'd love to have this k ... (no text) · Al B. Harper · Wed Feb 24, 2010 at 05:03:55 am EST
        
        That's "stuff that I write". And there's a space after an ellipse. (no text) · Helpful HH · Wed Feb 24, 2010 at 08:01:33 am EST
        
        Alright! That's the kind of stuff that I'm talking about. (no text) · Al B. Harper uses too many ellipses anyway. · Fri Feb 26, 2010 at 07:26:21 am EST
- Took me a bit to get into it, but I found it interesting with some very nice touches · Visionary · Tue Feb 23, 2010 at 04:44:10 pm EST
  - Thanks, Vizh, I really appreciate the feedback. *text* · Messenger · Tue Feb 23, 2010 at 05:56:59 pm EST