Tales of the Parodyverse - That's either really good or really bad.

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Subj: That's either really good or really bad.
Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 at 04:27:26 pm EST (Viewed 322 times)

Reply Subj: Now, this one was good...
Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 at 07:27:41 am EST (Viewed 376 times)

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> I usually find your work is something of a struggle to read (I wish I knew why - from a technical point of view [my usual bugbear] your writing is fine).
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> This one, however, I rather enjoyed reading. Well done.

I've been trying to focus on adding a lot more detail to my stories. So it either has to be that, or that you get bored easily, since this story had more rapid action than most do.

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Adventures in Parodyverse - Outlaws of the New Law Part 6 · Anime Jason · Tue Feb 05, 2008 at 02:30:12 pm EST
- Very nice threat level management and an intriguing character question. (no text) · HH · Fri Feb 08, 2008 at 06:37:13 am EST
  - I tried to keep the limitations simple because it works best that way. (no text) · Anime Jason · Fri Feb 08, 2008 at 08:44:02 am EST
- It's nice to see Liu Xi with a limit to her power; often she comes off as uber-powerful (no text) · Hatman · Thu Feb 07, 2008 at 11:52:04 am EST
  - Sometimes the limits are simpler than you think. · Anime Jason · Thu Feb 07, 2008 at 12:32:27 pm EST
- i'd hate to stage a mass execution... (no text) · Jack · Thu Feb 07, 2008 at 12:38:14 am EST
  - It makes good television. (no text) · Anime Jason · Thu Feb 07, 2008 at 12:31:21 pm EST
- They might be forgetting something, but they're smartly addressing the issues that have come up so far. (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Wed Feb 06, 2008 at 06:44:35 pm EST
  - Yuki would agree with you. (no text) · Anime Jason · Thu Feb 07, 2008 at 12:30:53 pm EST
- Now, this one was good... · Manga Shoggoth · Wed Feb 06, 2008 at 07:27:41 am EST
  - That's either really good or really bad. · Anime Jason · Wed Feb 06, 2008 at 04:27:26 pm EST
    - Or both. It's sort of quantum. · Manga Shoggoth · Thu Feb 07, 2008 at 05:37:23 am EST
- I hope Anna didn't program any wardrobe malfunctions into the on-air festivities... that upsets people. · Visionary · Tue Feb 05, 2008 at 10:21:02 pm EST
  - Yuki is the producer. Blame her. · Anime Jason · Wed Feb 06, 2008 at 01:45:33 am EST
- More good stuff (no text) · killer shrike · Tue Feb 05, 2008 at 04:58:52 pm EST
  - Noted. (no text) · Anime Jason · Wed Feb 06, 2008 at 01:29:38 am EST