Tales of the Parodyverse - Bettie would be flattered to hear you say that. ;)

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Subj: Bettie would be flattered to hear you say that. ;)
Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 at 01:17:33 am EST (Viewed 372 times)

Reply Subj: Could have used a few more moons. ;-)
Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 at 12:54:39 am EST (Viewed 1 times)

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But if word of her relationship with Dream and April has circulated as broadly as Ian and Mike have hinted at in their stories, I suspect that Vizh might feel slightly awkward trying to interact with her at all. $\:\)$

> As I mentioned before, I think the poetic descriptions were very inventive and apt... the decision to make it into actual poetry was a good way to go.

Ian was the one who suggested breaking the single-character description segments into free verse, which I liked, because it further differentiated them from the scenes involving multiple characters.
The (over)use of metaphor came about because I wanted to convey the intimacy of shared sexual moments between these three, but I didn't want it to degenerate into porn fanfic of my own characters, or even into hackneyed romance novel pseudonyms for the same.

> Bettie obviously cares for both of them, and finds her way of fitting in there quite well. I'm not sure how large that bed is, so it might be a tight fit... er... Scratch that. You could interpret that last bit far too many ways.

She kind of feels like she's been down this road before - the fact that she harbors no illusions about a relationship with Dream lasting forever is telling, I think - but to steal the words of one of the characters who inspired her creation, she's decided that some things are worth getting her heart broken for. Again.
And I imagine that at least one of Dream's beds is deliberately modeled after those honeymoon suite-style round beds, complete with multicolored lava laps surrounding it.

> Good stuff!

Thank you. $\:\)$

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- Intresting. It's was some what different from what I normally see from you but still good. · L! · Mon Nov 12, 2007 at 04:06:32 pm EST
  - Yeah, that's what I was going for. It's good to break out of your patterns every once in a while. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Mon Nov 12, 2007 at 06:16:51 pm EST
- It was good for me. Was it good for you? (no text) · Dancer. · Mon Nov 12, 2007 at 08:53:45 am EST
  - You just like the font color. ;) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Mon Nov 12, 2007 at 06:15:23 pm EST
- An an experiment, I rather think this one worked. (no text) · HH · Sun Nov 11, 2007 at 09:02:40 am EST
  - As I hinted at ... · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Sun Nov 11, 2007 at 08:04:34 pm EST
- Could have used a few more moons. ;-) · Visionary · Sun Nov 11, 2007 at 12:54:39 am EST
  - Bettie would be flattered to hear you say that. ;) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Sun Nov 11, 2007 at 01:17:33 am EST
- A well written look at the PVB's most interesting triple (no text) · killer shrike · Sat Nov 10, 2007 at 09:58:38 pm EST
  - As I said in the chat, I wanted to establish the dynamics of how all three would interact together. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Sat Nov 10, 2007 at 10:04:20 pm EST