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Al B. Harper

Member Since: Mon Jan 04, 2016
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HH

Subj: Can I give a big gasp now?
Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2017 at 08:36:17 pm EST (Viewed 530 times)
Reply Subj: Appropriate-magnitude gasps are always appreciated.
Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2017 at 07:59:11 am EST (Viewed 3 times)


So, it was Aella. Yes, she was top of my guess list since the last few parts and I was glad to see it was true (I still had some money on it possibly being Lisa). Nice way to bring her into a large and complicated family.

Not sure I got there via your hints though, unless it was subconsciously. You could bash me over the head with them and I'd probably still miss them really. But the first bit of prose confirmed it.

I'm also very glad to see the return of Hacker9. *first big gasp* Hooray! I wish him and Aella many years of torment as their romance develops.

I also very much enjoyed seeing old Winkelweald halting to control his chagrin. And hissing!

We seldom get to see him so defeated. It truly was enjoyable to behold. (Don't kill me now mm'okay?)

Good to see HV, Wilbur and Apostate get their just desserts back in 1552 as well. The use of Knifey(s) to bring it about was a nice touch.

So, it's the Storyheart which is in the tomb. *there's my second big gasp* Interesting development.

And the big villain is the Dreaming Celestian! That...actually makes a lot of sense given all that has occurred. Hopefully Sarah of Dunboogie will get some luck in. She'll need it.

Couple of questions:

How did the Hood get through with Liu Xi?

Who owes the Hood? Who did the Hood help to make? (Ok don't really expect answers to those two).

Unless he means Denial? "In some ways I made you son."

Anyway, great job Ian, I know you struggled with some of it, but it has all come together in fine form and has been a pleasure to read.


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    I gather that the new SF movie Passengers was a solo-star vehicle for Chris Pratt - until Jennifer Lawrence indicated her availability to be in it and the entire script was rewritten.


Haven't seen that move yet, but I plan to.


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    That's a good musical choice. I always go to Night on a Bald Mountain for the Hooded Hood.


Oh yes, Mussorgsky has just the right balance of foreboding villain and crazy insane for the Hood. In fact, my Hood go-to musical piece has always been Gnomus but I like your choice too.


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        Quite right. The Apostate is back in our very next chapter - and this time it's personal!

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        I bet he won't last till the end of the issue though.


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    How much?


Well, he got whacked with sticks by the beaver girl. So that's pretty much a win.


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    Sure, blame the girl. It's society's way. The male releases his spores and he's a real plant. The girl lets some onto her stamen and..."



Hey, in this case i think it's fair. He was just a...Bog Thing... till she started to sing to him. The hussy.

Also, that's a romance we need to see more of one day. Or maybe not.

But we do need the story of the night the three visitors came to call on the lovely Zemette sisters. Maybe for Valentine's Day? That gives you a month.


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      Aww my granddaughter is dead? I barely knew her.


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    She went to the bad. But not unil she had birthed a child. See forthcoming diagram.


Oh Zod, another child? Really weren't there enough already? Looking forward to finally seeing this chart.


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    Urban Druid is in the next but one part, I believe.


Really? Ha! Good 'ol Scarmander. We hardly knew ya. Did I ever post #2? I think it's half written.


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    Kyza is a she, although she certainly wears mens combat armour (and Dirth Vortex's helmet).


Well you certainly used male pronouns to refer to him and he in the relevant chapter. I know because I went back and checked.


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    She has plans for when she meets her father. Her alternate-timeline male replacement (c.f. Cody/Kara) is male and unnamed; but there can be only one, probably whichever one eliminates Al B. first.


What did Al B. ever do to these kids to deserve such I ask (apart from never being there or paying a cent of child support)?



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    Right now it's Shroedinger's inseminator.


Bloody Shoredinger. The cat is dead or alive, but not both. I don't need to open the box to know which, or for it to become reality. Its status and reality is not dependent on me seeing it. That's my theory and I'm sticking to it.


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    I think Bambi died before he even made it to the Parodyverse.


I'm going to have to go back and find out when she died now. My poor dead granddaughter who went bad. If only she'd had some stability in her life.


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      To the Nexus! And beyond. Funnily enough I was reading about a theory on what would happen if you went through a black hole earlier, and am now wondering if Liu Xi and Kahn will face spaghettification on their way though?


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    Noted.


Kahn certainly seemed to end up smeared to atomic smithereens.


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    I'm suffering a severe allergic reaction to going back and checking my facts again, which is possibly a sign that I need to step away from the keyboard for a bit.


Yes possibly, and no need to check anyway - you would have it correct I am certain.


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    I'd be writing a very different story if I was.


Indeed.


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    It's a shame we haven't done more on the history of GMY.


There's nothing stopping you. Well except you need to do other stuff first. So there is something stopping you.

After the indigenous population traded swampy land for items of significance - wasn't a fort first built by the Spanish? Known as the Presidio Fantasmas (Fort of the Ghosts)it lasted until the French (not the Dutch) kicked the Spanish out and renamed the place as Nouveau Paris right? Which then Became known as Old Gotham once British colonials started moving in, and then became GothamYork after the British firmly established rule. The metropolis part being added later as the city grew?

Maybe.


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    Noted. I think they were both around at Mumphrey's Christmas bash in UT#201.


Still suspicious.



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    Yikes! You really are going to try to fit EVERYONE in.


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    Well, more people than are currently around. Pudu Lad hasn't had his moment yet.


He's off with Semi-Transparent Lad and Fetish Lad in the League of Lost Lads no doubt.


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    You may want to pace your seat-edging. I reckon if I finish UT#359 today (with a double-sized effort) and start UT#360 tomorrow, I'll need a bit of a break before posting that last part. For starters, it's complex and I'll probably need to go back and add things in as I remember them; which isn't feasible if I've put it up in interim parts. Also, I'm a bit worried about quality of my current writing because of haste, so a breather might make the thing more readable and understandable. Finally, next week belongs to Sherlock Holmes before I get to PV stuff. So there may be a long advert break.


That's all good. It was the conclusion to #359 I was waiting for. And you delivered! Well done!

I can be patient for the next bit.




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    She was mildly appalled at all the footnote links I made her look up for me.


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    For UT#360 I will also need links to the Lair Babies incident, Baby Elephant, Rabid Wolf, the first destruction of Parodiopolis City Hall (possibly in a spiffy story), the Anti-League, the Botherhood of Evil Mutates, and the Willingham Historical Society's museum. Amongst may others.



Well, you don't HAVE to footnote/link all these things do you? (Baby Elephant - really - isn't it enough to just know it happened?).






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