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Reply Subj: But you can use as many blue pills you want without fear of the side effects. Posted: Fri Dec 23, 2016 at 11:51:52 pm EST (Viewed 952 times) | |||||||
Quote: Aha... a mini mystery to solve, and a chilling villain to defeat in the depths of madness-spawning Antarctica! And until I sat down to write this at 7am yesterday I had no idea that that was the refugees' destination. I was as surprised as Sally. Quote: I enjoyed Sally this chapter as she worked through her reroute game issues that denied her the much deserved beach retreat she was expecting. It occured to me that I have never really written a Silicone Sally-centric story before (except possibly the scenes where she joins the LL). This gave me an opportunity to redress the balance. Quote: Interesting to see how quickly the various subsets of refugees turn on each other here... I suppose that integrating such cultures would be a challenge even in the best of times.I'd have been happy to go into that a bit more had time and word-count allowed. If I'd been doing this run of stories back in the day I would probably have extended each short story to a full-length Untold Tale and packed a lot more in. But since the present storyline will pan out to about 1.8 novels in length anyhow (120,000 words) I think I'd better maintain some discipline. Quote: I'm curious to see what damage Haggie's little portal brings about, and of course how Ebony might yet be saved! I don't think that Sally would like to serve as her replacement after all, even in the very short term they may have left.We probably won't revisit this situation very much (well I won't), but I'll certainly drop a resolution in there. Quote: Quote: I found that Sion and Helen worked very well together as protagonists. They'll be back in a future section, obviouslyQuote: Well. I find them an appealing couple, certainly.It would have been easy to write more about the months between the first and second halves of the chapter, as they flee across 14th century Parody Europe dodging the Church of Conformity and its Inquisitors, dining with mad Lady D'Alancon, trading passage from the slippery M'sieur l'Avis, enduring the clockwork insect of Prague etc. And somewhere along the way their personal relationship took some steps forward also. Quote: Quote: On production news, I'm ready to post today's chapter except for the footnote/link bits, which you mentioned that you might advise upon.Quote: I apologize... I spent some late night hours looking through what I could find, but I seem to be rather limited while on vacation. Still, I hate to have held up the flow of the story.I'm going back to look at it right now. It will probably be the last chapter I put up before taking a family-mandated break for a couple of days to interact with less-tractible flesh and blood people. | |||||||
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