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Subj: I'll just stick to muffins for breakfast... and regift the toaster for a special occasion.
Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2016 at 12:19:32 pm EST (Viewed 534 times)
Reply Subj: For that deep-down acid scouring.
Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2016 at 06:05:40 pm EST (Viewed 3 times)


First, Kudos on a fun story with twists and turns and a hell of a resolution!


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    Well, as of yesterday I'd decided Danny really had to die to make the story land properly. Nobody goes to hell and comes back unchanged.


He did pretty well in his chapter, I thought... shut down the villains gloating and proved his devotion nicely. It was a sweet note, for all that a hell-bound tale could end on. I will say I was hoping for one last moment where that de Soth girl realized how badly things had turned on her, but then I always like to see the knife twist on these superior gloating types. Grimpenghast certainly provided more than a few good moments of that, so I wasn't left wanting for much.

It was a clever resolution to the problem with Danny being stuck in hell. I don't really approve of marriages to get a green card, but I suppose their history shows that it's not just convenience. Of course, nobody likes to see a college girl get married before earning her degree, especially to a boyfriend from hell.

This would really be the best of times for a Dancer written tie-in. At least Ma Shepherdson still has Sarah and/or Karl to provide the traditional church-wedding-then-grandkids ideal. I'll be sure to be standing behind the grandkids I provided when meeting them at the airport.





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