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Subj: Thanks!
Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2016 at 02:15:46 am EST (Viewed 477 times)
Reply Subj: What an excellent and creative way to restart your narrative.
Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2016 at 07:51:54 pm EST


This story was stalled for the most part until you made the suggestion to "change the POV character" so we got another appearance of the Church of the Glorious Duo which last showed up in an earlier interlude to this story. I guess they only show up during "interludes" \:\)


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    Some more storytelling and worldbuilding here, reintroducing and updating situations and cast and furthering the mystery.


This is part of the story was more of an interlude of sorts: It gets everyone to the point where they were originally going to be before the break in the story, now 3 years ago. This fact will be important.

The Church gets way more "world building" then the other part of the story. Most of what is written there isn't in any other story. Not sure that the situations with Chad, Ronnie & Friends were updated, just reminding the reader what they are. The only major change with them is Catherine now has blue hair.

Yes, I did side step doing anything with Lee Bookman. No I don't know if Lee remained in The Void wearing Chad's clothes. Yes, there is a reason why He didn't exit The Void with the rest of them.

What happened to Clive Hudgens will be addressed. As for what happened to Mr. Spooky. I did think of having him standing the shadows at the airport but chose to not do so. He'll show up again. He always does. \:\)


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    Bring on the pay-off!


Which will either happen soon or will happen in another 3 years from now! \:\)





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