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Subj: Yes, that reads more smoothly. Nicely done.
Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2012 at 05:08:26 am EDT

Reply Subj: That Strange Blonde Girl Part 4 (new and improved)
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That Strange Blonde Girl Part 4 (new and improved) · Anime Jason · Sun Aug 05, 2012 at 01:59:10 pm EDT
- Yes, that reads more smoothly. Nicely done. (no text) · HH · Sun Aug 12, 2012 at 05:08:26 am EDT
  - Excellent... (no text) · Anime Jason · Mon Aug 13, 2012 at 08:36:41 pm EDT
- Taking this seriously... · HH · Thu Aug 09, 2012 at 04:50:53 am EDT
  - I made some changes, they were relatively minor but changed the flavor of the story. (no text) · Anime Jason · Sun Aug 12, 2012 at 02:42:05 am EDT
  - Re: Taking this seriously... · Anime Jason · Fri Aug 10, 2012 at 12:57:11 am EDT