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killer shrike
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Hatman
Member Since: Thu Jan 01, 1970
Posts: 618
Subj:
An excellent origin well told
Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 at 06:42:51 am EDT (Viewed 1 times)
Reply Subj:
The Abandoned Legion #7
Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 at 11:08:04 pm EDT (Viewed 571 times)
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The Abandoned Legion #7
·
Hatman
returns from a week-end camping trip and offers the next chapter
· Mon May 24, 2010 at 11:08:04 pm EDT
It's always good to get inside the mind of the villain and it makes a nice narrative pause. Well done.
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· HH
· Sat May 29, 2010 at 07:21:09 am EDT
Thanks. Hope I didn't contradict any past history in the Moderatorverse
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Hatman
· Mon May 31, 2010 at 11:17:13 am EDT
A good origin story for a dark counterpart. It helps make him more sympathetic.
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Nitz the Bloody
· Wed May 26, 2010 at 01:36:47 am EDT
Don't let him fool you, he's still an evil bastard.
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Hatman
· Wed May 26, 2010 at 03:07:43 pm EDT
Nobody starts evil...
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Nitz the Bloody
· Wed May 26, 2010 at 07:53:34 pm EDT
I'm not sure about Ian...
· Hatman
· Wed May 26, 2010 at 11:04:50 pm EDT
It's good to have goals in life.
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Visionary
· Tue May 25, 2010 at 09:55:11 am EDT
Focus is important
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Hatman
· Tue May 25, 2010 at 10:07:24 am EDT
An excellent origin well told
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· killer shrike
· Tue May 25, 2010 at 06:42:51 am EDT
Thanks!
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Hatman
· Tue May 25, 2010 at 10:07:46 am EDT
Great stuff!
· Al B. Harper is impressed!
· Tue May 25, 2010 at 05:27:46 am EDT
Excellent
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Hatman
· Tue May 25, 2010 at 10:17:50 am EDT
He definitely has some issues.
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Anime
Jason
· Mon May 24, 2010 at 11:29:08 pm EDT
I hope they're a little more clear now though
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Hatman
· Mon May 24, 2010 at 11:41:42 pm EDT
Deleted Scene
·
Hatman
supposes this counts as a
· Mon May 24, 2010 at 11:12:10 pm EDT
I like the expanded personal flavor of the first person...
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Visionary
· Tue May 25, 2010 at 09:57:59 am EDT
As do I
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Hatman
· Tue May 25, 2010 at 10:19:53 am EDT
I'd say the first person certainly gave the actual chapter all the more power.
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· Al B. Harper still enjoyed reading this
· Tue May 25, 2010 at 05:29:58 am EDT
It looks like I made the right decision from the feedback thus far
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Hatman
· Tue May 25, 2010 at 10:20:59 am EDT
It would have worked either way...
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Anime
Jason
· Mon May 24, 2010 at 11:29:54 pm EDT
Re:
It would have worked either way...
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Hatman
· Mon May 24, 2010 at 11:45:02 pm EDT
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