The story seems complete to me. It differs from what made it into continuity, however, in that a story I wrote for Mumphrey's Christmas party had Visionary and Ebony promising to teach the Caphans how to read and write, something none of them did. (And I might have known that because Ian probably mentioned it to me in an e-mail, possibly after this story was written and not yet posted, and I went and tossed that fact into one of my stories.)