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Al B. Harper

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Subj: It could probably have used a villain or three...
Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 at 02:19:25 am EDT (Viewed 2 times)
Reply Subj: I love a happy ending!
Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 at 09:54:14 pm EDT (Viewed 372 times)



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    I'm not cleaning that bus, by the way. I'm not *that* charitable.


Isn't that what you have children for?

Dang - Al B. should have used that line in the story...


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    You know if Dancer was around to read this, it would turn into some 20+ part round robin somehow. There would be romantic entanglements, and lessons learned.


Yeah. We miss you Dancer! Hope you're doing ok.


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    Still, even as a one chapter story, I feel it was epic as is. Especially if we assume the bus is the infamous melancholy omnibus from the early BZL. That was a bus that could make a hobo feel like royalty.


It very well could be.




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