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Quote: Like I noted above, Shema has tried to teach Lara that timing really is everything. In this case specifically, that Lara has to learn that the timing isn't always right for rescue. She has to learn to try her best to preserve and take responsibility for her own life - otherwise it becomes meaningless. Shema does that by purposely causing a certain amount of uncertainty of whether Lara will be rescued from danger or allowed to die - and unlike injury, when it comes to death that's not a chance worth taking. In short: Whether the wall and interference make a difference, Lara wouldn't know for sure, and Shema wouldn't give her a clue - but it's not worth the chance to Lara to find out.
Quote: Shema and Thugos have something in common.
Kind of, except Shema isn't willing to bet people's lives on long shots. She already knows Lara is up to the task - it's just Lara who needs to learn that.
Quote: Indeed. But like all comic book villains he has overlooked something fundamental.
Always.
Quote: Feedback's always welcome and often shapes my writing processes. I've been able to refine and direct latter parts of this particular issue based on your comments, and I'll be bending some parts of next issue around some things Kirk has said.
That's why I asked - there's a fine line between helpful comments and annoying someone who has a plan and just had it derailed by comments.
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Quote: Oh, and post the next part already!
Quote: I really prefer more folks reading and replying. If the board is still moribund by Saturday I'll bite the bullet and post anyway.
Darn them causing delays...
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- #339: Untold Tales of the Parodyverse: Going To Extremes - Complete · The Hooded Hood burns off his travel budget. · Sat Mar 20, 2010 at 11:59:01 am EDT
- Beautifully tied together all around. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! notes that [spoiler villain] is paying him an uncomfortable amount of attention ... · Wed Mar 31, 2010 at 03:10:05 am EDT
- This whole chapter is so cool when read in one go · Al B. Harper - catches up on the last part by just reading the lot again · Mon Mar 29, 2010 at 06:16:32 am EDT
- "You knoweth...he really art a jerk. [Spoilers] · DONAR · Sat Mar 27, 2010 at 09:21:11 pm EDT
- See? Everybody's happy. · Visionary · Sat Mar 27, 2010 at 11:15:05 am EDT
- Extreme Part 4 replies... · Anime Jason · Sat Mar 27, 2010 at 10:34:54 am EDT
- Ouch · Hatman · Sat Mar 27, 2010 at 10:28:54 am EDT
- Aargh! · Rhiannon · Sat Mar 27, 2010 at 08:19:02 am EDT
- Something tells me there won't be a God of Sunshine and Rainbows in this New Pantheon · killer shrike · Sat Mar 27, 2010 at 07:32:53 am EDT
- This doesn't look good. · Rhiannon · Thu Mar 25, 2010 at 05:16:04 pm EDT
- Unexpected but very effective use of [spoiler villain]. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Thu Mar 25, 2010 at 03:35:48 am EDT
- Stirring the pot? · Anime Jason · Tue Mar 23, 2010 at 07:46:05 pm EDT
- It's not easy being a woman in the Parodyverse · Hatman · Tue Mar 23, 2010 at 06:10:07 pm EDT
- I never would have guessed (spoiler villain's) identity · killer shrike · Tue Mar 23, 2010 at 05:09:35 pm EDT
- All in all, I think I prefer the villains who just want to kill me. · Visionary · Tue Mar 23, 2010 at 04:41:27 pm EDT
- Noted. · HH · Tue Mar 23, 2010 at 08:18:14 pm EDT
- Interesting implications. [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Tue Mar 23, 2010 at 05:59:50 am EDT
- Poor Al B. I don't know what is worse, angry Muffy or bickering offspring. Probably the former. And what a surprise appearance by SPOILER right at the end there! Mor ... (no text) · Al B. Harper · Mon Mar 22, 2010 at 08:25:52 am EDT
- Very Interesting. Both Parts & I bet the upcoming parts will also be Interesting. · L! · Sun Mar 21, 2010 at 06:07:25 pm EDT
- This is good. · Rhiannon · Sun Mar 21, 2010 at 02:52:30 pm EDT
- Part 2: If I had a dollar for every time I heard that... · Anime Jason · Sun Mar 21, 2010 at 10:37:42 am EDT
- Part Two Thoughts · killer shrike · Sun Mar 21, 2010 at 10:33:33 am EDT
- Miss F is a multitasker · Hatman · Sun Mar 21, 2010 at 10:08:22 am EDT
- Some tense interactions... and that's just the EEE part. · Visionary · Sat Mar 20, 2010 at 06:20:36 pm EDT
- I'll try to limit the commentary then... · Anime Jason · Sat Mar 20, 2010 at 02:22:54 pm EDT
- Everything's better when its extreme · killer shrike · Sat Mar 20, 2010 at 12:39:46 pm EDT
- Everything's better when its extreme · killer shrike · Sat Mar 20, 2010 at 12:39:40 pm EDT
- Everything's better when its extreme · killer shrike · Sat Mar 20, 2010 at 12:39:30 pm EDT
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