Tales of the Parodyverse - You are a brilliant father and the best one for me.

Post By

In Reply To

HH is a tough father to have if you're an aspiring writer

Subj: You are a brilliant father and the best one for me.
Posted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 at 08:00:59 pm EST (Viewed 2 times)

Reply Subj: Good second draft, correcting the errors and omissions of the first while retaining the emotion. Well done.
Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 at 12:20:02 pm EST (Viewed 2 times)

<< Prev

NewEmailPrintRSSIndex

Nice use of Molly Tillinghast. I notice Aella comes ever closer to interacting with the mainstream Parodyverse. This should be interesting.

I've got two directions I could go in and at the moment I'm still weighing up which would take Aella more in the direction I want her to go in (and which she'd choose).

Posted with Microsoft Internet Explorer 6 on Windows XP

NewEmailPrintRSSIndex

Aella 9, - Refuge · Rhiannon · Mon Mar 01, 2010 at 06:56:39 pm EST
- Nice twist, an unexpected location, but one that fits for her to find herself in. Well done. (no text) · Al B. Harper · Sat Mar 06, 2010 at 11:18:57 pm EST
  - It was there or Paradopolis. I felt more confident there. (no text) · Rhiannon · Thu Mar 11, 2010 at 04:24:42 pm EST
- If anyone's interested... · Rhiannon · Wed Mar 03, 2010 at 08:25:03 pm EST
  - I like how her mermaid tail is reflected in her dress. (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Sat Mar 06, 2010 at 03:17:56 am EST
  - Always nice to get a visual, thanks for sharing! (no text) · Hatman · Thu Mar 04, 2010 at 04:47:31 pm EST
  - Nice work. I'll reply to the story asap too. (no text) · Al B. Harper · Thu Mar 04, 2010 at 09:24:59 am EST
  - Very nice (no text) · killer shrike · Thu Mar 04, 2010 at 06:33:09 am EST
  - Very interested indeed! · Visionary · Wed Mar 03, 2010 at 08:48:08 pm EST
  - Very expressive - and unexpected. (no text) · HH · Wed Mar 03, 2010 at 08:47:28 pm EST
- Glad to see her evolving and taking ownership of her own life. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Wed Mar 03, 2010 at 01:19:21 am EST
  - I just wish I had a clearer idea what she's evolving into. (no text) · Rhiannon · Wed Mar 03, 2010 at 08:03:38 pm EST
- Molly gives good advice. Another excellent chapter. (no text) · killer shrike · Tue Mar 02, 2010 at 05:07:17 pm EST
  - Thankyou. (no text) · Rhiannon · Wed Mar 03, 2010 at 08:02:45 pm EST
- I hoped something like that would happen sooner or later. (no text) · Anime Jason · Tue Mar 02, 2010 at 02:55:57 pm EST
  - Now it's happened. (no text) · Rhiannon · Wed Mar 03, 2010 at 08:01:59 pm EST
- Good second draft, correcting the errors and omissions of the first while retaining the emotion. Well done. · HH is a tough father to have if you're an aspiring writer · Tue Mar 02, 2010 at 12:20:02 pm EST
  - You are a brilliant father and the best one for me. · Rhiannon · Wed Mar 03, 2010 at 08:00:59 pm EST
- Thatta girl · Hatman · Tue Mar 02, 2010 at 11:01:15 am EST
  - She's still got a long way to go. · Rhiannon · Wed Mar 03, 2010 at 07:58:44 pm EST
- Hooray for Aella... · Visionary · Mon Mar 01, 2010 at 08:44:16 pm EST
  - She hasn't really done much. · Rhiannon · Wed Mar 03, 2010 at 07:53:32 pm EST