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HH
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killer shrike

Subj: Part Two responses:
Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 at 04:53:26 pm EST (Viewed 2 times)
Reply Subj: Part Two thoughts:
Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 at 03:19:04 pm EST (Viewed 3 times)



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    Another excellent use of first person story-telling to open with. I quite like the Vespiir character because of the work, an impressive feat, given my usual rampant Caphan bigotry. The short cameos of all the Higher Powers offering her advice and support was an excellent touch, though where was the Infrequnt Aarvark?


He was being infrequent.

I like Vespiir because she's got a lot of story arc ahead of her. She won't be going back to Lemuria.


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    The scene with the heroes fighting Flay and Skinner was quite nifty as well, though as Jason pointed out you mislabelled one of them as "Peel" a few times.


I'd better check that again. I thought I'd weeded them out.


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    Lastly, very nice job with the Vespiir artwork, and the second "Secret Avengers" inspired poster, one who's silouette I thought I recognized, but now I'm not so sure. Excited to see the new line up regardless of who it is.


I've been holding back on it in part because I think a new line-up requires a series of stories to properly establish them and I was doubtful I'd have the time or energy for it. I'm going to try but it's already becoming difficult to protect the time.






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