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Subj: Re: Well, I'm trying to get a little action back on the board.
Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 at 07:39:28 pm EST (Viewed 1430 times)
Reply Subj: Re: Well, I'm trying to get a little action back on the board.
Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 at 06:59:48 pm EST (Viewed 17 times)




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    I sometimes avoid it because it can rob events of their immediacy. The structure of this chapter is a compromise, alternating between the third and first persons in consecutive sections.


Mostly I use the time-shifting tools when I'm switching time scales back and forth. Like one person will start out telling a story of what happened, and then back in time we go to explain how it happened, etc.



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    You'll notice she was also our window into understanding the motives and enthusiasms of the enemy.


Chiaki can be good at that sometimes.



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      Also, on another aside: Because I'm falling behind on Zephiir's Prophecy I'm going to confuse people even more and start posting a 2nd story with Anna and Chiaki called Catch and Release. It has a surprise ending.



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    I noticed it there. Reading it will be my reward when I bash another 3000 words out.


It'll still be there.






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