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Subj: There are very few things that aren't improved by Shep dancing.
Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 at 02:35:42 pm EST (Viewed 18 times)
Reply Subj: Just dance... it'll be okay.
Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 at 02:25:27 pm EST (Viewed 1602 times)



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    A great start to the fight, from a great perspective. It's one we don't get a lot of, since Dancer's stories aren't written in first person. I really enjoyed her perspective on things, and it seemed very true to character.


It also allowed me to offer some exposition that I couldn't have otherwise done except in an omniscient narrator style.


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    So far so good... it's an impressive, multi-pronged attack on the Carnifex. I'm always nervous when things look to be going well early on... it can mean the worst is yet to come.


Noted.


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    Of course, charcoal-broiling Chiaki probably qualifies as the beginning of that. Somehow, I figure she's got an "out" planned, but a toasted corpse is pretty convincing. I look forward to seeing how this somehow saves them all.


Would it comfort you to know that I have poster kill-permissions and aren't aftraid to use them? Of course, I can't say which posters.


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    It does save them all, right?


Save them? But what about the red star?


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    Looking forward to the next bit!


I'll need to write half of it. I've decided to come at that fresh tomorrow since it's a cast-heavy section. If I feel keen later tonight I'll find a solo bit to type up.






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