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Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 at 10:48:58 am EST (Viewed 1 times)

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I enjoyed the tale, especially the way the pumpkin-devil's oversight allowed the boys to turn the tables, and hint at the end of a vengeful fire waiting to return. Personally, I would plant a lot of pumpkins on that ground to keep that witch buried. Maybe some zucchini too. Once zucchini starts growing, it never seems to run out... it's pretty mystical in its own right.

Good job!

thanks for the asome review, im a bit new to this so i am intrested in any advise you or anyone else can give

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        Re: Keeping on our toes · Anime Jason · Mon Nov 02, 2009 at 01:22:29 am EST
        
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    - Re: Well done. · Alex Thankyou · Tue Nov 10, 2009 at 11:47:31 am EST
  - Nice bit of dread there at the end... · Visionary · Sun Nov 01, 2009 at 12:41:41 pm EST
    - Re: Nice bit of dread there at the end... · Alex Thanks · Tue Nov 10, 2009 at 11:42:14 am EST
    - Re: Nice bit of dread there at the end... · Alex Thanks · Thu Nov 05, 2009 at 10:48:58 am EST
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