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Subj: But first you have to catch them.
Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 at 05:00:34 pm EST (Viewed 5 times)
Reply Subj: This is why Free Range Brides are so preferable.
Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 at 12:46:53 pm EST (Viewed 540 times)



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    A fun Halloween treat! Always good to see Vinnie in his element. Er... so to speak. I mean, things with Liu Xi didn't quite get that far. Not that we saw, in any event.


I do have one more Vinnie/Liu Xi story in mind, but not until I've cleared some of my other multi-part tales. Then it'll be time for "The DeSoth Family Dinner", in which Vinnie has to take Liu Xi home to meet the folks.


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    Great job establishing a creepy location and keeping the whole story atmospheric. I also like how you break down the differences between Liu Xi's areas of expertise, which are grounded in the natural world, and Vinnie's, which are decidedly not. It makes them a good team... no wonder he's so sweet on her. Plus, who doesn't love dry socks on a wet and chilly night?


I think the key to these two person teams is for each to react differently to situations and for each to bring something unique to the partnership.


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    Good stuff!


Jolly good.






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