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Subj: For some reason the actual story comes up blank for me but I was able to read it in the reply box to Vizh's messagePosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 at 06:58:12 am EDT
| Reply Subj: Beats most country club dinners I've been to. Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 at 03:45:12 pm EDT |
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A fun chapter, from the valet parking to the last dance of the evening (or first, I suppose.) The Kiwi of crime is suitably disgusting, and I look forward to seeing him get his greasy come-uppance, although I fear it might not come within this story.
I especially liked the script to the comic that closed the chapter (although the shrinking text was a bit problematic.) Really well done!
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This was a meaty chapter with some good pushing-of-the-boundaries. It's got a nice Saturday matinee feel to it too that reminds me a bit of the Batman cartoons.
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