Thanks for the feedback, MS! I don't see much offensive either, but it's kind of hard to gauge with this subject matter. (To say people can be pretty sensitive about this sort of thing is... a major understatement.)

I'm looking at this sort of as a learning process. Hopefully as it goes on, the writing will get sharper and the art will get better. If you look at any webcomic's archives, there's usually major improvements from point A to point B and so on, so... that's the idea, anyway.