> A fun new chapter, with more character developmet for Regret and even more plot development for Black.
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It was the idea that Regret herself might have regrets and nightmares that finally gave me the impetus to get tghis storyline going.
The villain reveal at the end was something I wasn't expecting, and the tie in to the Boss Deadeyes plot was an intriguing addition. Through in spiffy and things should get very messy indeed... I look forward to it!
I'm still taking easy routes for writing, and throwing in lots of disparate characters and watching them explode is one such way.