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Al B. Harper
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Subj: Nope. It's the oil you have to add to the chocolate to stop it gumming up the machine...Posted: Thu Dec 04, 2008 at 09:31:18 am EST (Viewed 403 times)
| Reply Subj: That's because it's not multiplanar I'd guess...and that my friend is your (and your daughter's) problem right there. Posted: Thu Dec 04, 2008 at 04:00:27 am EST |
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As is always the case with my writing, please feel free to comment.
I welcome both positive and negative criticism of my work, although I cannot promise to enjoy the negative.
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- Dancer #46a: "No, really. The last thing you wish to do with a horde of insane, frothing, unwashed Cultists of an Elder God is imagine them naked." · Manga Shoggoth · Mon Dec 01, 2008 at 08:39:57 am EST
- LOL! Yeah, that's the best kind of Dancer story, funny and I dont have to write it! :-) (no text) · Dancer · Sat Dec 06, 2008 at 05:26:10 am EST
- Leaving a plotline like that hanging in a Dancer story can be dangerous. (no text) · killer shrike expects the two of them to be engaged before the story is over · Wed Dec 03, 2008 at 08:05:17 am EST
- If the hot chocolate machine is out it's the perfect time for my non-experimental multiplanar chocolate fountain to make an appearance. FLOW MY BEAUTIES, FLOW!!! (no text) · Al B. Harper - did enjoy the story · Wed Dec 03, 2008 at 05:18:14 am EST
- I could use one of those handy Shepherdson guideline cards in dealing with people as well. (no text) · Visionary doesn't want to know what it suggests about handsome ne'er-do-wells. · Wed Dec 03, 2008 at 01:29:27 am EST
- Dark Thugos seems to do well as a waiter... (no text) · jack · Tue Dec 02, 2008 at 08:24:00 pm EST
- An excellent continuation of the plot and the tone both. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Tue Dec 02, 2008 at 03:04:26 pm EST
- I sense a small hint in there somewhere. (no text) · Anime Jason · Mon Dec 01, 2008 at 11:43:01 am EST
- Excellent tie-in, demanding an instant sequel. (no text) · HH · Mon Dec 01, 2008 at 09:41:53 am EST
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