> > Before I make my comments, a few times early on in the issue, the Shee-Yar are listed as the Shi'Ar. But that mistake was a small one & was corrected in their later references.
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> I'd better go check on that when I'm done with replies.
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Ok.
> > On to my comments: I would have like to have seen A-Class/ The Lair Legion been around for a few stories before getting the stuffing beat out of them. But I do like what you did with my half thought out notes about the them (I would have never thought of assigning each a Military class but it works!) I look forward to seeing what happens next to them.
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> I deliberately fudged the time between their debut and their mission against the Purveyors, to allow for anyone who wants to write them taking on a case to do so. Up to a week or so might have gone by between the two incidents.
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> I've also kept three of them around for #14, where they'll get more to do.
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I didn't realize there was time between the 2 incidents. If I wasn't going to be gone I might have attempted to write something with them. But guess that won't happen.
> > Bring on Part 13! I might get a tie-in before I leave for a week & half (Visiting Family). I've got some ideas (Dury & Ronnie is the most time sensitive idea, the rest can wait).
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> All ideas and submissions gratefully received. The whole point of doing this is so that everybody can have fun writing bits. Otherwise I could just get on with my own stories.
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I may still do Dury & Ronnie when I get back. I've got like half a story planned out in head.
