Tales of the Parodyverse - Shep seems to think it was a Vizh-started RR.

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Subj: Shep seems to think it was a Vizh-started RR.
Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 at 08:58:25 pm EDT

Reply Subj: Yeah, this is a Dancer-started round robin all right... It just snowballs into something bigger and bigger.
Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 at 08:32:51 pm EDT

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> But it does so in a very entertaining way. I liked the meeting, even though I agree with character Vizh about the necessity of it... it's good to see it committed to continuity. It's also good to see that there isn't anyone on the team who would approve of killing an innocent man to avoid a bad future.

Honestly I felt quite bad about posting my chapter, since in retrospect it seemed like I was bringing down what had been a light-hearted fun story. It felt like I'd just taken over. I wrote chapters 4 and 5 today out of pure guilt and overreaction.

> The Garrick and Amber scene was also meaty... always good to see Amber again, and to see her push back. Glory and Marie provided some good counterpoints to the Legion's plan of action, and they're both so loveable that it's hard to argue against them.

That scene wasn't there at all when I first posted, but then I read Shrike's survey response and decided those points needed to be made in-story. Finally, a nice scene between Vizh and Kerry, with a stunning plot twist brought by Hallie. (You know, I'll have to write a Hallie/Kerry story sometime...)

Can holograms burn? Proceed.

> As you've probably already seen, I've added my bit. Looking forward to more!

Jolly good.

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