> So, the line-up for the Caphan Lair Legion is probably Vaahir, Pel, Miiri, Vespiir, Hacker 9, Kriije, and the Manga Shoggoth. Operating out of the ruins of the House of Raael they battle for truth and good-quality slavery against a universe that hates and fears them.
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That might be an interesting story. After all, the Nine are the only exception to the Shoggoth's position on Slavery that I am aware of.
As is always the case with my writing, please feel free to comment.
I welcome both positive and negative criticism of my work, although I cannot promise to enjoy the negative.
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 Saving the Future Part 3: That’s the Way the Story Goes · The Hooded Hood courts controversy and would be interested in hearing our heroes' reactions · Sun Apr 20, 2008 at 09:44:36 am EDT
- See, now I want Salieri in this story too. (no text) · Dancer. · Fri Apr 25, 2008 at 07:06:33 am EDT
- Of course... · Manga Shoggoth · Mon Apr 21, 2008 at 04:51:02 am EDT
- Dream's answers: [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Mon Apr 21, 2008 at 02:44:41 am EDT
- Interesting. I'm not sure what's going on but I await to find out. · L! · Sun Apr 20, 2008 at 06:22:06 pm EDT
- That's interesting... · Anime Jason
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- That's interesting... · HH is a little tired of how often he has to retype these answers because of lost messages · Sun Apr 20, 2008 at 02:13:42 pm EDT
- Ah, so that's what this story is called... · Visionary · Sun Apr 20, 2008 at 10:58:55 am EDT
- Could Chronicler at least tell me where Epitome is? · killer shrike dumped his original plan for his whereabouts and is in need of a new one · Sun Apr 20, 2008 at 10:26:08 am EDT
- Until I checked what the first 2 chapters were I didn't realize what this was Part 3 of · Hatman · Sun Apr 20, 2008 at 10:08:36 am EDT
- Ouch. (no text) · Rhiannon · Sun Apr 20, 2008 at 09:59:11 am EDT
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