> Some meaty issues and a lot of beverage drinking in this chapter.
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The action picks up from this section onwards.
> The problem of what to do with the prisoners of war was certainly a prickly one. Of course, I'm all for a solution that doesn't end with genocide against the pigeon people, but I can sympathize with those who feel that they're getting off easy. It probably would have been more politically savvy for Kiivan to really stress how the war criminals among them would be found and punished... but then, he likely has other problems do deal with at the moment.
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As Danny pointed out, there are upsides to the decision Kiivan eventually made, not least of which is that Caph has begun to establish a reputation as a player in galactic politics, initiating a solution which contradicts plans made by some of the big players like the Shee-Yar and the Skunks.
As for the getting off easy, the Thonnagarians have lost over 90% of their people, have been defeated and humbled, and have been granted mercy by a race they sought to enslave. That's got to be seen as something of a punishment.
> Even though it was my idea (er... fictionally), I question returning an aggressor's arsenal to them, no matter how their leadership has changed. There's no positive way to spin that.... well, aside from the fact that Kerry isn't getting her hands on it. I do, however, find the solution of tasking them to defend that world Vaahir protects to be a rather elegant one. Good thinking fictional me.
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Without their weapons it would have been sending them on a suicide mission, the equivalent of driving them over a minefield. It would also leave the valuable and desirable z-alloy under Caphan control, tempting more technologically advanced races to come and seek it. Finally, it perpetuates the feud between Caph and the Thonnagarians, since the z-alloy is sacred to them and its loss would require a jihad to the death.
> Well, the plan to see the Emir worked, for all the good it seems to have done. Vespiir's gift probably came pretty close to straddling the line to predicting the present, which is really less impressive. I now wonder if there's any time left for her to establish who she is and why she was there, or if all hell is going to break lose instead.
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Let's go for the "all hell" option, shall we? obviously, our next issue picks up exactly where this one left off.
> Looking forward to finding out!
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I'm still in two minds about how and when to post it. All views are gratefully received.
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- #327: Untold Tales of the Parodyverse: On Affairs of State and the State of Affairs - Complete · The Hooded Hood has struggled through getting this chapter posted and read at last! · Thu Apr 03, 2008 at 12:28:01 pm EDT
- RI just cant wait to see how this all ends happily. Because it WILL end happily. (no text) · Dancer · Fri Apr 18, 2008 at 09:04:36 am EDT
- Whoah! This isn't an entirely conclusive conclusion, is it? (no text) · champagne · Mon Apr 14, 2008 at 09:37:46 pm EDT
- An elegant solution to an ugly problem. (no text) · Hatman · Mon Apr 14, 2008 at 03:12:18 pm EDT
- That wasn't a good ending. (no text) · Rhiannon · Mon Apr 14, 2008 at 12:02:20 pm EDT
- I hate to admit ... [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Sat Apr 12, 2008 at 06:36:21 pm EDT
- "I suck your planet! I suck it up!" · killer shrike · Sat Apr 12, 2008 at 11:55:42 am EDT
- Is "I told you so" a legitimate legal defense? · Visionary · Sat Apr 12, 2008 at 11:16:57 am EDT
- I guess that kind of works out... · Anime Jason · Sat Apr 12, 2008 at 08:58:41 am EDT
- I'm not entirely sure they were betting on the right horse... · Visionary · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 10:22:08 pm EDT
- That could have gone better for them ... [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 09:31:50 pm EDT
- This is certainly getting nastier. · Rhiannon · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 11:12:33 am EDT
- It's too bad... · Hatman · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 10:01:16 am EDT
- Well...maybe half of them will make it. · Anime Jason · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 09:15:42 am EDT
- That's going to leave a mark. As are the beatings (no text) · killer shrike · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 08:46:14 am EDT
- Dancer loves this story. Dancer says do more. · Dancer is disappointed at the non-reply-y posters. Bad non-reply-y posters! >:-/ · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 07:18:02 am EDT
- Heh, I liked the rusty line · Hatman · Wed Apr 09, 2008 at 01:53:35 pm EDT
- Diplomats don't seem suited to the Parodyverse ... [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Tue Apr 08, 2008 at 11:25:38 pm EDT
- You know, maybe it's time to consider making a new fashion statement... · Visionary · Tue Apr 08, 2008 at 07:21:58 pm EDT
- This was really enjoyable. · Rhiannon · Tue Apr 08, 2008 at 01:43:38 pm EDT
- I knew it. · Anime Jason · Tue Apr 08, 2008 at 11:29:19 am EDT
- You did. · HH · Tue Apr 08, 2008 at 11:55:26 am EDT
- Disorder in the court (no text) · killer shrike · Tue Apr 08, 2008 at 11:17:51 am EDT
- Most cool. Much enjoyment. (no text) · champagne · Tue Apr 08, 2008 at 07:20:13 am EDT
- Remembrances of two "families" ... [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Mon Apr 07, 2008 at 09:22:19 pm EDT
- You know, there's really no reason to poison me and bring down the feel-good vibe you have going here... · Visionary · Mon Apr 07, 2008 at 08:55:33 pm EDT
- *sniff* Our little Caphans are all growed up · Hatman · Mon Apr 07, 2008 at 08:45:31 pm EDT
- That does sound like an ominous warning. · Anime Jason · Mon Apr 07, 2008 at 07:49:11 pm EDT
- Well, that went better than expected... · Manga Shoggoth · Mon Apr 07, 2008 at 03:14:10 pm EDT
- That ending's not a good sign. · Rhiannon · Mon Apr 07, 2008 at 11:40:18 am EDT
- *Scans sky for the other shoe* (no text) · killer shrike · Mon Apr 07, 2008 at 11:08:39 am EDT
- Yay! More Caphan Caphanyness! (no text) · Dancer likes Caphan Caphanyness!! · Sat Apr 05, 2008 at 08:24:05 am EDT
- Could be worse. · Hatman · Fri Apr 04, 2008 at 07:42:55 pm EDT
- We always can forgive our enemies more quickly than we can our traitors. · Visionary · Fri Apr 04, 2008 at 06:57:22 pm EDT
- That brings up a question... · Anime Jason · Fri Apr 04, 2008 at 03:31:05 pm EDT
- An interesting an appropriate sentence ... [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Fri Apr 04, 2008 at 01:38:00 pm EDT
- Well, that was a surprise (no text) · killer shrike · Fri Apr 04, 2008 at 10:29:05 am EDT
- An interesting decision. (no text) · Rhiannon · Fri Apr 04, 2008 at 10:18:54 am EDT
- Given the week I have had this is more than pleasurable... · Manga Shoggoth · Fri Apr 04, 2008 at 06:11:11 am EDT
- Dammit, this is why they shouldn't be allowed on field trips without signed permission slips... · Visionary · Thu Apr 03, 2008 at 11:09:16 pm EDT
- Wolverine commands respect wearing yellow, I suppose it's time Vizh learned that trick (no text) · Hatman · Thu Apr 03, 2008 at 10:58:22 pm EDT
- Wait a minute... · L! · Thu Apr 03, 2008 at 08:57:41 pm EDT
- Okay, now I have a definite prediction... [Spoilers] · Anime Jason · Thu Apr 03, 2008 at 07:15:12 pm EDT
- Fun stuff. [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Thu Apr 03, 2008 at 03:37:43 pm EDT
- Another fine chapter (no text) · killer shrike · Thu Apr 03, 2008 at 01:48:44 pm EDT
- Very good but very short. (no text) · Rhiannon · Thu Apr 03, 2008 at 12:57:19 pm EDT
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