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Subj: Not anymore, there isn't.Posted: Sat Mar 22, 2008 at 11:26:10 pm EDT
| Reply Subj: An excellent start! Although I couldn't help but feel there was a missing bit that you left out.... Posted: Sat Mar 22, 2008 at 07:31:01 pm EDT |
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> At least, that's the scuttlebutt.
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I asked the children "Would you like me to bother with writing part two?" They looked indignant and both said "Sure, but you've got to get part one right first! That's not all that happened."
I sense trouble ahead.
> A very fun story, from what sounds like it was a very fun adventure! The two young heroes make for an appealing cast, and there's a good mystery to solve.
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The other half of the cast comes in for part two.
> I liked the introduction scenes for both... quite well done. Here's hoping their poor father isn't pushing up daisies.
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Noted. It's a good job nothing bad ever happens in my stories.
> I look forward to more adventure!
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I don't guarantee to complete this one.
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