Subj: I think it has some stiff competitionPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 at 10:18:17 am EST
| Reply Subj: This has the beginnings of what could be the most disturbing love triangle ever. Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 at 11:49:35 pm EST |
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> Always fun to see you writing, and comedies are especially welcome. Naturally, Flapjack fits the bill as an excellent lead in this situation. I mean, he might not have the heroic jawline, or the heroic morals, or personal hygiene that one might expect from most leads in hero stories... but he does know how to deliver a leering line at the perfect time, which is almost a power itself...
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He seemed like the logical addition to the plotline just now.
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