> An inspired tie-in to the storyline. I like the continuation of the Proctorish vibe you're giving The Moderator, and the inclusion of the group's newest member the Scarlet Lawnmower. Having Search Engineer be an alternate reality version of the Librarian was also a nice touch.
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I shied away from identifying who the Moderator is a version of, though. My vote is blacked out below:
Michael Wooster
> Quick note on Sig: he doesn't write on his torso, rather he twists the nipple/knobs on his chest to write on his face. Just imagine him as the Mad Thinker's Awesome Android with an Etch-R-Sketch for a head and you get the idea.
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I've corrected that in the text.
> But besides that infintesimally minor quibble I thought this was great fun, and also quite generous of you to pen the next chapter.
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Next two chapters now, actually. And so back to work...
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- Link should have given Flapjack some lovin'. (no text) · jack · Thu Jan 17, 2008 at 08:20:58 pm EST
- Clearly they have no idea what they're in for. Excellent. (no text) · Hatman · Fri Jan 11, 2008 at 08:16:41 pm EST
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- It's good to read a story written by you again. · L! · Thu Jan 10, 2008 at 06:28:40 pm EST
- To keep the villains' theme going, you need a henchman named "LOL INTERNET." :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Thu Jan 10, 2008 at 05:40:57 pm EST
- He's not one for planning ahead, is he? · Anime Jason · Thu Jan 10, 2008 at 02:24:36 pm EST
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- Its just like Flappy to form new friendships so quickly · killer shrike · Thu Jan 10, 2008 at 01:05:15 pm EST
- Funny, funny and funny. (no text) · Rhiannon · Thu Jan 10, 2008 at 12:52:43 pm EST
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