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Subj: It came together for me ...Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 at 03:14:15 pm EST (Viewed 409 times)
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> I ultimately had Dominic defer to Bettie because, aside from Mumphrey, she's got the most years of living of anyone at the mansion under her belt, and as a conservative, it'd probably go against his instincts a bit to disrespect his elders too much. Even when he argued with her, I wanted to convey his sense of frustration with her choices, because he'd have a hard time understanding how someone with the benefit of her wealth of experiences could not know better than to avoid dealing with Dream.
> I almost included an exchange in which Bettie called Dominic on projecting his own issues onto Dream, because she'd see that a stoic like Dominic is worried that he's somehow taking advantage of Kat, by turning to her as an occasional emotional shelter from his storms. I couldn't quite make it fit, but it would have culminated with Bettie telling Dominic that everyone is entitled to seek comfort from someone, although I doubt he'd accept that.
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Some very good insights into the Paragon of Power. You should write him more often. 
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... When Fleabot pointed out, in his interview, that we tend to react more strongly to traits we recognize in ourselves.
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 Hawk & Cougar: Homelands & Couplings (A Short Story Starring Mr. Epitome & A CrazySugarFreakGirlfriend!) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Wed Dec 12, 2007 at 08:30:45 pm EST
- I think she made a wise choice in seeking out Dominic's help (no text) · Hatman · Wed Dec 19, 2007 at 04:24:10 pm EST
- An interesting scene with Dominic helping Bettie (no text) · jack · Fri Dec 14, 2007 at 09:11:25 am EST
- As always, a nicely written story! · L! · Thu Dec 13, 2007 at 08:25:47 pm EST
- When you think about it, Mr Epitome has a lot to put up with. (no text) · HH · Thu Dec 13, 2007 at 05:29:29 am EST
- He should start a tutoring job for all Mythland refugees. · Visionary · Thu Dec 13, 2007 at 12:12:22 am EST
- That raises even more questions! [Spoilers] · Anime Jason
 · Wed Dec 12, 2007 at 10:45:58 pm EST
- He would wear a banana hammock *shudders* · killer shrike · Wed Dec 12, 2007 at 10:19:02 pm EST
- A short story but packed with good characterisation! · Al B. Harper · Wed Dec 12, 2007 at 09:25:48 pm EST
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