> > > Well it's part point of view. If they ask Lara she would try to figure it out from the way her own abilities work - which means moving the contents within the elevator.
> Lara could probably demonstrate how she would do it, but she'd have to be in the elevator with them or watching on video (which won't work in the dark unless it's an infrared camera).  She might conclude then that it's some sort of mechanism that automatically targets everything but human flesh.
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We've seen humans disappear before though, too.
> > > Liu Xi instead would believe that the elevator isn't just one elevator when they get in, and they're actually getting out of the same elevator they stepped into but don't realize it. She wouldn't be able to explain the missing items though.
> That also reflects that Liu Xi's thought processes can be simultaneously complex but very simple at the same time. ÂÂ
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She can be confusing in two languages.
> > For this story I'm trying to test how easy or hard it is to tell a tale concentrating solely on the cut-down Legion, so bringing in ringers would defeat the narrative purpose.
> In this case the ringer can help them figure out how it's done but not who or where.  And even then, she might be wrong because her experience is limited by her own abilities.
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I'm also trying a cut-down narrative style that strips out the rambling asides I sometimes use, to try and establish a frenetic fun pace.
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- #323: Untold Daily Tales of the Lair Legion versus [Spoiler you won’t be able to guess] - updated for Sunday · The Hooded Hood's daily story for fun-loving PVB fanatics. · Fri Nov 16, 2007 at 12:35:42 pm EST
- Sunday was a fun part, too. I like the easy, fun plotlines. Thanks. (no text) · Scott · Wed Nov 21, 2007 at 04:31:44 pm EST
- Daddy says... · Rhiannon · Tue Nov 20, 2007 at 02:26:12 pm EST
- Oliver the doorman is a tough guy. (no text) · jack · Mon Nov 19, 2007 at 08:20:07 pm EST
- Nifty Sunday edition! · Visionary · Mon Nov 19, 2007 at 01:08:24 pm EST
- Thanks. · HH · Sat Nov 24, 2007 at 11:55:52 am EST
- That ending was just nasty. (no text) · Rhiannon · Mon Nov 19, 2007 at 11:45:59 am EST
- Yuki's done lost her mind · killer shrike · Mon Nov 19, 2007 at 10:21:41 am EST
- Ooh. This is fun... · Manga Shoggoth · Mon Nov 19, 2007 at 08:30:05 am EST
- I hadn't thought of that. · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Mon Nov 19, 2007 at 01:33:08 am EST
- That could be even worse... · Anime Jason · Sun Nov 18, 2007 at 11:59:52 pm EST
- New costume? · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Sun Nov 18, 2007 at 03:32:11 am EST
- No good can come of that last part. · Anime Jason · Sun Nov 18, 2007 at 01:47:17 am EST
- So Hatty didn't want to stick around and sign autographs? · Visionary · Sat Nov 17, 2007 at 07:35:58 pm EST
- With what? · HH · Sun Nov 18, 2007 at 07:27:54 am EST
- Good but still too short. (no text) · Rhiannon · Sat Nov 17, 2007 at 03:00:36 pm EST
- Like you? · HH · Sat Nov 17, 2007 at 03:04:59 pm EST
- Does (spoiler) get a grim new attitude to go with his black costume? · killer shrike · Sat Nov 17, 2007 at 12:22:48 pm EST
- Have replied once already, computer ate it. Try 2: Nice story, too short. (no text) · Rhiannon · Sat Nov 17, 2007 at 04:54:35 am EST
- "Love in an elevator ..." · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Sat Nov 17, 2007 at 01:46:35 am EST
- How shocking! A real life elevator attendant? In this era? (no text) · Scott · Fri Nov 16, 2007 at 10:51:15 pm EST
- That's it. From now on, I take the stairs. · Visionary figures there's nothing worth visiting about the third floor of any building anyway. · Fri Nov 16, 2007 at 07:56:41 pm EST
- The ending could be a set up for April's slash fic (no text) · killer shrike looks forward to more daily hijinks · Fri Nov 16, 2007 at 03:14:59 pm EST
- The "Daily" is the best part. · Anime Jason · Fri Nov 16, 2007 at 02:03:50 pm EST
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