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> That was a hell of a confrontation!
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Thanks. It should have been more detailed in explaining exactly what was going on, and I left out a riff involving how Glory might be "better off" the way she was, but I'm glad to be through it.
> There was a lot at stake, and it made me squirm quite a bit watching it all unfold. And it was especially rough because I like all of the characters involved so much.
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I can only take credit for the likeability of 60% of the cast.
> Fleabot and Letitia's interactions make them a fun pairing, and make her an appealing character. However, you did a great job of showing how, despite being nice, she's still a villain at heart, doing what she thinks is best regardless of the wants or rights of others. Her attack on Glory was especially cruel, I thought, as was he intended plan for Hallie (whose arrival was an especially cool moment, btw... Thanks for that!)
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I'm glad you liked the stuff with Hallie. I wasn't too sure how she came off in this.
> I really hope Letitia used her M/ELTSER on herself, and not some more... permanent solution to matters.
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That would be a twist, wouldn't it?
> And... what she did to Glory will wear off, right?
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Yes. Again, I wanted to make that clear in the story, but skipped past it. I don't plan to do evil things to Glory for a while yet.
